Overall, your app looks good, but we would like to hear a little bit more about Irisviel's motivations and weaknesses to give us a more well-rounded picture of the character.
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REVISION REQUEST
Overall, your app looks good, but we would like to hear a little bit more about Irisviel's motivations and weaknesses to give us a more well-rounded picture of the character.
You have one week to respond. Feel free to let us know if you have any questions or concerns.